dog door for walls
I created a horror story but not sure if it's good. If it makes a difference at how good or bad my writing is, I'm 13. A chain of silence was broken by the door eerily creaking open. A horrid scene was exposed, followed by a blood-curdling, high pitched scream of the young girl who stood in the arch of her parents’ bedroom door. The girl continued her heart wrenching screams as she clutched her worn teddy bear, trying to move her stubby legs, but not succeeding. Her body went numb, her vocal cords venturing on with their screams of fright. Suddenly the cry for help was muffled, his hands swiftly clasping tightly over her petite mouth and nose. Grasping for air, the girl scratched and bit…nothing helped. As young as she may be, Gracie knew exactly what was going on, her life was only going to last a few moments longer, she knew she wouldn’t she tomorrow. But something changed before she fell unconscious, she heard bells. He retreated, thinking the last eye-witness was dead, thinking he would get away with his felony and hoping this would not be the end of their killing spree, but there was one thing he knew was certain, he wouldn’t get caught. He could see out of the corner of his eye, the police, their sirens, their flashing lights of blue and red, the neighboring apartment buildings and houses of the lower city lights flicked on, hoping to see what all of the commotion, which had awoken them from their peaceful dreams, was about and the faint sounds of police dogs below. His brows arched up with glee, a small grin appeared on his face, knowing that this would be like taking candy from a baby or playing a practical joke -- easy. He hesitated before going through with his escape plan, one of which he concocted beforehand rather than on the spot like the others. He knew the police would come inside soon enough…he waited. Not soon after, the door downstairs had been kicked down, a loud crash made it clear that this wasn’t just the police, but a weapon that he wouldn’t have thought that they would’ve brought. His thoughts made him stop in his tracks, but the sudden rough stomps running up the spiral stair case made him continue almost instantaneously. He saw rays of light coming from both stairways, this affected his plan little, but still…he couldn’t help but wonder. He let thought go, and then continued his instant escape. His thoughts of the back yard guarding plans were pin-point exact, only a few police. What imbeciles, he thought, but disliked the sounds just yards behind his own personal being. He hadn’t climbed out the window just yet, knowing that knocking out the guards before escaping, would be almost impossible, for there would be numerous groups of law reinforcements, he instead hid. He climbed, there were secrets of this house that hadn’t been know, even by the law, including hidden passageways. As he finished adjusting to his spot, the police rushed in, ramming the down doors and weakly supported walls as they went. He knew his trickery worked for while he waited he led traces of not only a different escape route, but leading forensic laboratory researchers towards an enemy, one of which was going to be their next victim, but he rather have him suffer instead. Suffer like he did, for years…and now he was just simply returning the favor.
electric dog door
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